Audience feedback- first draft magazine review

For my audience feedback I asked a range of people for their thoughts on my first draft of my magazine review. One thing that was said was that the doodles that have been included are really effective and links well with the film poster and makes it look childlike and relates to the idea of Spiderman. One thing that was said to maybe improve was to move the bottom image more central and to obviously include the review. Also another idea is to possible change the font.