Magazine review- final edit how to

From my first audience feedback I decided to add aspects to my magazine review and change the layout. I wanted to change the layout because I thought that it would look more interesting if the aspects were mixed up, what I mean by this is that when I added all of the aspects it looked very blocked and simple. Even though I wanted it to be simplistic I didn't want it to be so simplistic it was boring which is why I decided to change the layout. I kept the title in the same place as well as the drawing in the bottom left hand corner. I then added more equations in the background in order to make it look more full. I also anted to split the images up so I decided to put the two smaller ones on the first page and the bigger one on the second page. By splitting them up I think that the interest is split between the two pages. By splitting the elements between the two pages makes the pages equally as interesting, which makes it overall effective.