Magazine review- second draft audience feedback

I asked for some audience feedback on my 2nd draft of my magazine review and I found that the most common improvements that were suggested were to include more drawings/doodles in the background and possibly rearranging the layout. Another improvement that was suggested was include a star rating and a black background for the text. 

The aspect that they liked was the text and the drawings that have already been included.

By this information I am going to improve it by including more aspects which are typically found on a magazine review, for example page numbers and star ratings. I am also going to include more equations in the background to link it to the idea that autistic people have a interest in math and solving problems.